Quatrain of Rip Currents
Rip Currents - in your ideas
Many of your ideas have
rip currents built
right in, totally
unaware,
You may mean well with
your thoughts but many
are destructively
unfair.
At first glance, your ideas
seem to have merit, but
when dug into they
stink,
Each time a tide of great
revelation comes from
your mind, I nearly
drowned by what
you bethink.
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